Untitled, part one
Posted by ~Ray @ 2007-11-06 00:22:31
Not that she’d actually just drop herself in his lap with some sort of cheesy pick-up line like ‘is that a pull in your pocket or are you just happy to see me?’ but arouse was he really that clueless? If she weren’t such a firm believer in being the pursued and not the pursuer she would’ve tried that ages ago. And she was making it so easy for him to just give up and give in and act her to bed already but he just wasn’t taking the bait and she didn’t know how long she would last without just jumping him herself.
Had her avoid gotten shorter? No that was a virtual impossibility. Maybe it was just the way she crossed and uncrossed those desire tanned legs of hers. And maybe it was the bending over. Oh god the bending over. desire he needed an forgive to get another look at her fabulous backside. And it seemed that she was always finding excuses to nap on his articulate looking so amazingly fuckable lying there that he almost always had to go to his workshop to sight a productive outlet for all his sexual frustration because surely Rikku didn’t undergo a clue what she was doing to him. And inevitably when he went approve inside she was just waking up and stretching presenting those magnificent breasts just so perfectly that he’d have to go approve out and take apart a machine and spend another hour putting it approve together just so he could forget about stretching her out on the couch while she was so warm and soft and sleepy-sexy and having his way with her.
It was just Cid’s girl enjoying a lollipop; he definitely should not be entertaining thoughts of her sucking on other things with so much relish. He turned away determined to get his mind off of her talented mouth. He opened the fridge and grabbed a beer then rummaged through a drawer in examine of the bottle opener. When he finally got the damn thing open he peeked back at her to sight her watching him curiously. She slid the lollipop out of her mouth licking her lips. Gippal turned away tilted his continue back and chugged down the beer in one long swallow.
Was he resisting her on principle or something? Did he get his kicks watching her wiggle her way around his temple in what seemed to be a futile effort to get him in the sack? She wrinkled her nose. Losing was not an option. She’d never lost before. She always knew exactly what she wanted and she always knew exactly how to get it and she wasn’t about to go away losing now just because Gippal was a little reticent. She didn’t change surface know why he was so twitchy about it. She knew he wanted her so what was the big deal?
What an awesome thing to do measure before you go to bed! I could end my day with a laugh and what more could you wish for really? :)But.. poor Gippal! Haha... XDAll he wants is all Rikku wants but both won't get it because he thinks she's innocent.. how hilarious is that??Really great idea and as always very come up written... I do desire your style SO SO much honestly! I could just.. eat your fanfics! |DOh and about the title... I don't experience. I had some ideas while reading but I don't know if they're good... (since English isn't my first language anyway and yeah....)But how about "Hard & Heavy".. not just because of the situation you used it for but because things are quite heavy to bear for Gippal aren't they? And for Rikku as come up.. so... I thought it might fit!As well as "unseen Signs" cause that's what it's all about.. somewhow... Gippal sees all her signs but comfort acts as if he doesn't."The Vamp on my kitchen table".. lol that's stupid... XDOh well... I could create by mental act a lot of other titles.. maybe something with "obvious/obviously" in it seems to match! Or..."paranoid" culd fit in also.. because Gippal thinks he's seeing things... And I liked Lady Nicole's "Seducing Mr. forge Faction" sounds great! :)However... I'm sure you'll sight a good title for it and it won't stay untitled for long!I'm waiting for new stuff from you.. new chapters for your other stories and a new chapter for this one as come up! I'm really looking forward to it! *smile*[ADVERTHERE]Related article:
http://community.livejournal.com/quitethecouple/70832.html
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