to be posted before adding another one of yours. - Leave a constructive comment on the three photos above yours based on these areas:Exposure - too dark too lighten perfect for the intended ideaComposition - Balanced. Unbalanced. No Clear SubjectColour Balance - Too Many. Out of Context. Jarring. Dead OnMood - how does the photo impact you (subjective to see if it conveys the idea the photographer was trying to convey)Sharpness - poor fair good excellentGeneral Comments - what would you do to improve the picture?conclude free to mention on other photos too!
Originally posted at 2:48PM. 19 November 2007 PDT( ) **Natasha L** edited this topic 5 months ago.
Exposure -Just right. Composition -Fantastic framing. act upon fit -Perfect. Mood -Conveys a sense of innocence. Sharpness -Spot on. command Comments - Really like this photo,can`t really see any bad points. Exposure -Spot onComposition -nice framing on this shot. act upon fit -Looks good on my observe. Mood -Kinda makes you wonder what he is up too. Whats his purpose. Sharpness -Excellent. command Comments - Nice focus,just the right amount of alter in the accent as not to confuse from the subject but enough for you to comfort see the detail. Exposure -Just about alter. Composition -Really interesting view. act upon Balance -good. Mood -get a sense of communicate from the alter,nice cheeky smile looks like he`s having fun. Sharpness -Great. command Comments -Really looked happy to have his conceive of taken,Nice pleasing photo. Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S6500fdExposure: 5 sec (5)Aperture: f/3.7Focal Length: 19 mmISO Speed: 100Flash: Flash did not blast.
bettahalf:Exposure composition are sight on. Even better if the reflection could be out of her glasses. Mood - I can't really choose up a mood but that's kind of intriguing in itself. Descartes:Incredible subject incredible background. Detail great. Composition - terrific. I like the color apparel - good thing he wasn't wearing stripes. Exposure - very good though i'd prefer to see a bit more light on his face. Great photo. Lookingglass:Don't experience how you kept both the foreground and her approach in such excellent focus. Love the composition. Love the look on her face great photo. I've got the reflection in the glasses thing going too.
rhettmaxwell's photo:To me the flash is a little bit overwhelming in that it shows some harsh follow behind the affect and also causes part of the background to be shrouded in darkness. It's a nice tight crop and the subject's position is good. It moves my eye from right to left into the photo. Black and color was probably a good choice here -- it does work well with the affect arss5000's photo:Very nice use of lighten. Again black and white was a good choice and the subject's position moves the viewer's eye right across the photo. I think that a tiny boost in exposure to carry out a bit more detail in the shadows might have improved this photo a bit._mello_'s photo:GREAT highlights in the eyes. Very sharp focus on the subject too. Nice off-centre composition but there's a caveat here. The background is a little bit on the work side and maybe in order to combat that. I might undergo centred the affect and tightened the crop some more. My photo is here -- fire away! :-)
I don't think I'm doing the commenting right... I commented on the three before me but I didn't do it here... Is that where we're supposed to comment. I have been leaving comments on the individuals pages. Not trying to get around the rules or be unfair just uncertain as to how things work.
I evaluate I'll comment on the above 3 photos here and on each photo.. since I'm also not sure where we're supposed to comment. ;o)mello's photo:Exposure - perfectComposition - BalancedColour fit - Good. like the hair.. maybe a little alter bring up to show it off more. Mood - Love the serious expression!! I anticipate this is the age when you're "too cool" for the camera.. my teenage sons have both given me the same look!!Sharpness - excellent love the dilate in the eyesGeneral Comments - the only thing that could alter this photo more powerful is to undergo the background blurred a little. On some of my portraits. I also add a dark vignette to get more focus on my subjects- that might also bring home the bacon for this photo. Overall an EXCELLENT natural portrait! :o)ej's photo:Exposure - a little too dark but maybe that was the intention?Composition - Balanced but I evaluate it would be more effective if the subject was off centeredColour fit - GoodMood - I like the natural expression excellent interpret!Sharpness - excellent the eyes are stunning!command Comments - A beautiful portrait!sugary assemble's photo:Exposure - a little too light the radiate is a bit overwhelmingComposition - nicely centered but I be to like off centered portraits the bestColour fit -nice but a little brightMood - I like the happy mood! He looks like he's ready for fun!!Sharpness - a bit on the poor align but comfort a cute photoGeneral Comments - I accept with you.. he IS CUTE! A sweet portrait!
Maybridge's imageExposure - perfect for the intended ideaComposition - Good subject but needs cropping to achieve better balance... go rule of thirds and shift section above her continue to a degree. act upon Balance -Dead On - excellent. Mood - I love the mood of the visualise... she seems to be searching her memory for something important. Sharpness - Excellent - nice DOF as come up. General Comments - I like the image but I would cut it so that the subject was not in the centre of the visualise. Virion's imageExposure -ExcellentComposition -Excellent but the hands on the right side distract my cerebrate on the main image. act upon Balance - Dead OnMood - I am a cat lover so I am naturally drawn to any conceive of like this... Sharpness - Really excellentGeneral Comments - I would cut the image on the alter and destroy the extra set of hands... then it would be a really superb visualise! Cheers!
The above visualise is a self-portrait through a mirror. Comments below :O)Virion*Exposure: for its purpose and at such a moment. I evaluate it is just fine.*Composition: A little too much happening at the upper parts of the picture and also the random hand at furnish left can be a tad confusing to the viewer.. is that her hand or is it someone else's?*Colour Balance: The red blouse is a good break in colour :) Over-all pretty good.*Mood: Its great! I love how you can see how she adores the cat - The cat looksa tad unhappy about being back up up desire that but I evaluate this is cool cos allcat lovers know how cheeky and fussy they can be.*Sharpness: Not bad at all!*General Comments: Over all a good job. The hand in bottom left really is a bitbewildering so I evaluate perhaps the composition needs a bit of bring home the bacon - I think a bit more ofa close-up shot would have done the cat some justice as his face is a bit of a dark mass at the moment,plus his eyes would look great if shown a little closer-A close-up will also give moreof a comprehend of like and warmth between pet and owner. Maybridges03*Exposure: Almost spot on!*Composition: Subject is nicely centered :)*Colour fit: Not too bad as monochrome but this would have been great in act upon. I just feellike there's too much life and engrave in this photo for it to be in monochrome but well done either way!*Mood: Great mood! Nice contemplation shot - looks desire she has a ring on her touch? Engagement?Looks like she's thinking about something/someone special :P*Sharpness: Great!*command Comments: Well done over all :) I don't have any overly negative things to say all praise here. LittleThingsPhotography*Exposure: Great for the purpose of the photo*Composition: Fantastic the way it is - Although if it were upto me. I would have had the a bit morefront-facing but thats just me!*Colour: True to the subject :) sight on*Mood: Very cute but to me maybe I'm reading into it too much but I feel a bit of sadness from it?*Sharpness: Great but could use a little work*command Comments: Fantastic work in all areas you know what you're doing so come up done (mind you imno expert just giving personal opinion)
Here's exploit"eh eh" by iuk My comments... Just trying to be constructive. Obviously fell absolutely remove to criticize mine... And be nasty at it! :-DVirion:*Exposure: Fine*Composition: The hand and the archway on left are quite distracting. *Colour fit: Love the red change*Mood: Look desire the girl is really enjoyng the moment*Sharpness: Can't understand if the alter on the edges of the frame is wanted*command Comments: good job. A pity for those two flaws in compositionbalcer17:*Exposure: the highlights in the background grass are quite overexposed maybe some processing could reduce it*Composition: good!*act upon: good again.*Mood: gets me quite worried about the future of this kid holding a riflegun at his age so naturally...*Sharpness: quite noisy.. couldn't be at a bigger version since the picture is private*General Comments: i really liked the cause of the riflegun barrel pointing at the corner of the picpaula-b:*Exposure: quite dark but I like the overall effect*Composition: what's on the alter edge? is it the close in of the reflect? I personally find it distracting. A little too much ceiling but in my opinion the composition is saved by the lamp/fan in the upper left corner. A grieve that your fingertips got out of the frame!*act upon: has some blue/cyan tint but I desire the result*Mood: I really like the way you look away*Sharpness: good overall (again. I still don't like the blurred frame on the right...)*command Comments: Good. Both as a photographer and as a model :-D
I really like this photo of my son. If you folks have any suggestions to improve the shot I'm sure I could find some crawly critter and try again. I'm going to post my comments on the photos instead of here. That way the comments stay with the photo after we go away the next homework assignment. Natasha could you affix and let us experience where we should be commenting?
Oh uh couldn't mention on balcer17's photo because it's private. I'll do it here balcer17:Exposure: The background is overexposed but the foreground is good. Composition: Very nice with the gun pointing send like that. I also like the shoe under the hammockColour: goodMood: I found this photo very disturbing he looks so comfortable with that gun. Sharpness: Poor very grainy especially in the face. command Comments: Overall a pretty good shot but needs work on the exposure and sharpness
Arss5000Exposur: perfect for the intended ideaSharpness: goodGeneral mention: I evaluate that the girls face is too dark. More lighting on move of her approach would be betterIsland ladyExposure: perfectColour fit: perfectMood: Its really comforting to look to this photoGeneral comments: your photo is really good. I evaluate in this hw this is the beat photo. Although I liked the model color eyes but I wonder if it was color how this will alter the photoSouthernbelle20056(Kelly)Exposure: perfectSharpness: excellentComposition: balancedGeneral Comment: I think that the photo would look exceed without the grown
@island ladyExposure - perfect high key tones. Composition - BalancedColour fit - PerfectMood - very melanconic moodSharpness - excellentGeneral Comments - It would be great in color and white too.@Happy wth my D80 bt comfort totaly lost's photosExposure - too darkComposition - No alter SubjectColour Balance - goodMood - interestingSharpness - fairGeneral Comments - I think it would be better if it would be a little bit lighther and zoomed on her approach.
Mario - Extraordinary photo of an extraordinary approach!Just the alter exposure to capture all the texture in his face. I like the contrast between the silver of his hair and the cook tones on his face. Z. Lovely photo. Like the way the accent is blurred so the cerebrate is all on her. I would have like those strands of hair off her approach tho that's probably a personal preference. Her hair has great shine where its together. Fizza. like this moody come up lit shot. In this one i like the let go abandon of hair causing a follow on her face. Here's my photo.
astey;Exposure - perfectComposition - perfectColour Balance - a good color mouth going onMood - annoyed or hangover or stress very good sunita;Exposure - perfectComposition - pole coming out of his head?act upon Balance - more saturation maybe?Mood - really good almost does not look desire a real humanmario;Exposure - perfectComposition - is left ear missing? very good tho. Colour Balance - great use of light left eye looks good. Mood - thoughtful and intense.
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